“The World”
Alondra Munoz
Period 2
April 25, 2011
Personal Essay
Topic-The world
The world is a crazy place to live in and I would like to change a many things. So if could change three I would choose to eliminate hatred, wars, and guns. I don’t know how I’ll do it but I’ll try my best.
First, I would eliminate hatred. Why hate each other when you can love everyone around you? Hating someone just leads to problems. People around you are special (different) in their own way just like yourself. There’s no need to hate everyone around you, especially if you don’t know them. People are just like you they have problems just like you do. They do the same things you do.
Next, I would eliminate wars. Fighting is just so dumb; this is what hatred leads to.
Any way what’s the point of fighting, all you get out of it is people dying and getting hurt. Everyone has a family member they love and they have to die for us just because some selfish reason. Why fight when you can make peace. Everyone wants something but they can’t always have it. So stop the violence.
Lastly, I would eliminate guns. It’s what kills people in war. Another thing is, gangs use them to kill each other. Guns are a dangerous weapon and it’s not necessary to have around. All they do is kill people and what’s the benefit of that.
That’s why I would eliminate Hatred, wars, and guns out of this world all they do is bring violence into the world (our world).
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