Brandon McNeil

Brandon McNeil

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April 25, 2011

Personal Essay

Topic-If I Could Change the World

       If I could change the world I’d get rid of all violence on these streets, gangbanging, and drugs. I know this might sound dumb to all bad people but look I have my reasons.

       First, I’d get rid of all violence. The reason I say I would get rid of violence is because we have too many people dying and getting killed over violence. Because of violence our world is getting destroyed and we are losing a lot of privileges and people to this little game called violence.

       Next, I’d get rid of violence – for two reasons.

One reason is because there is no point of killing people or hurting them. Second reason is why anyone would want to hurt someone else’s family and have them going through a lot of sad moments and memories.

       Finally, I’d get rid of gangbanging and drugs because for one drugs are bad for your health, mind, it’s just bad for people such as little children. Gangbanging is very dangerous towards family, and friends. Gangbanging can leads you too be locked up dead by gangbanging I guarantee that you will not last long on the streets or maybe not this world by gangbanging.