Tonesha Blakemore
Read 180 Homework
April 25, 2011
Personal Essay
Topic- If I could change the world
If I could change the world I’d get rid of violence, homework, and non-cute clothing. I know this sounds kind of interesting so just listen up to my reasons!
First I’d get rid of violence. I’d get rid of this because if we didn’t have all this violence and crime in the world then a lot of people family members wouldn’t be dead. My aunt got killed to a violent crime because someone was angry and wanted to use a gun on her. If violence wasn’t such a big crime in the world today then I think it would be a lot easier for some folks or the world in general.
I’d also change students doing homework. I believe that if us student’s did not have to do homework than it’ll be a lot easier on us because if we don’t do our homework it brings down our grade for the class. Now what if you score very well on your test, class-work and quizzes in all but you don’t turn in your homework then that homework will get you down. So if we didn’t have homework some kids will do well it’ll probably give some F students A’s! So get rid of homework for we can have more honor roll students.
Finally I’d also get rid of non-cute clothing, I would get rid of this because i know that people have their own personal style but, if it was up too me everyone will have the same style because it gets tiring when everyone is talking bout each other because their clothing isn’t on point like theirs is and their shoes isn’t. So if I could change the world for people not getting talked about. I would change their clothing style that everyone will just be telling them there out fit is cute 24/7.
So to make MY world better, I’d get rid of violence, homework and non-cute clothing!
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