“If I could change the world”
Paola Mares
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4/25/11
Personal Essay
Topic: If I could change the world
If I could change the world I get rid of polices officers, schools, and vegetables. I know that it sounds weird but I got my reasons
If I could change the world I will get rid of all the
Bad thing in the world and I will get rid of all the schools
Of the world.
Then I will get rid of some police officers.
I will get rid of the polices officers because there not so nice that’s why. Other things I will get rid of all the bad people that we have in the whole world
If I could change the world I will get rid of all the vegetables, peanut butter, jelly I know I sound really weird but I have all my reasons to put all that because I don’t like none of this thing moms give us to eat.
If I could change the world I will get rid of all the gangs, the guns, all those who kill people and all the drugs they have all those bad gang members.
I will get rid of them because for they cannot get rid of all the bad people for they can’t cause more trouble and all the vegetables in the whole world.
That’s what I would do for I can change the world.
Your story makes no sense..im sorry to say but i'd thought you could of done better...it was an okay story..
ReplyDeletePlus I agree on getting rid of police..