Gilbert Robinson

Gilbert Robinson

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April 25, 2011

Personal Essay

Topic-if I could change the world

    If I could change the world I’d get rid of all violence on these streets these days it be drive byes drug wars, and gangbanging. It might sound really dumb to some of these people that really don’t know about the streets like that but I have my own reasons about the streets.

          First I’d get rid of all violence that’s going on in the streets. The reason I say this because we have too many people that’s dying and getting killed because of violence and gangbanging. Because of violence that’s going on in our world to this day right now. And we loose a lot of privileges and people to this game stuff.

        Next I’d get of violence- for three reasons.

One is because there are know point of killing people or hurting people. Second reason is why would anyone would want to hurt someone else family and have them going through a lot of stuff because somebody killed one of there family members that they loved and had good memories with. And for three why who you want to kill you own kind.

Finally I’d get rid  of drugs and gangbanging because for one drugs are really bad for your body and your health  and little kids should not be on corners gangbanging and moving drugs very dangerous towards family’s to have a family member out there on a corner because if they be out there for so long they will be dead or in jail for life.