Kiara Berry

Kiara Berry

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April 26, 2011

Personal Essay:

Topic: If I Can Change the World

            Have you ever thought about changing something in the world that you wish would stop to this day? Well, I do, I wish I could stop the violence, racism, and parents with no control in their kids. I think this because everyone is dieing in this world each and every day when we should all love one another and help each other when possible to make this world a better place. So it should be a stop to this immediately!

            The first reason I think should be changed is because violence shouldn’t be allowed in this world. Don’t get me wrong we all going to live life and not going to like others, but it don’t have to get to that point that we have to kill one another. But little do you know, it be the young teens that haven even grown up to see what the real world about. Such as gang banging have a lot to do with this. Everyday teens and evening grown up gang bang and kill one another. Also from what I’m hearing about everyday is peoples getting their house broken-in. I feel that it’s not right because people work hard for their things and it’s not to be stolen by others being selfish and not thinking about nothing, but them. As the sane go,” DO BAD THINGS TO OTHERS AND BAD LUCK WILL COME BACK ON YOU”. It’s not right for things like this should happen to peoples, so now everyone is have to get alarm-systems for their house. Drug is involved because all teens do is smoke and drink, and most dieing in car accidents. So this is why I believe violence should be changed.

             The second is racism because we all are human-being and should treat each other equal. We should not let what happen years ago about slavery or anything that effect to this world today, but it have made some improvements. There also should be no stereotypes types involve our color. We all can do about the same thing. But we do have different religions and other style and looks that relate to colors, but it doesn’t mean anything. Treat each other how you want to be treated with respect.

            The third reason is parents’ not taking control of their children. Its parents that don’t care what they kids do. If they could do what they want and don’t care nothing about it until consequences come their way by being pregnant and it’s mostly girls my age. I feel that you knew what you were doing, so you should not want to let the new born live their lives. But it is hard now in days.