Da'Jona Fowler

Da’jona Fowler

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April 25, 2011

Personal Essay-

Topic-If I Could Change the World

        If I could change the world I would get rid of uniforms, death, and punishment. I would change all of this stuff because its very important stuff to me that I wish that would leave my life.

        First, I would get rid of uniforms because they are very tacky and that makes me feel like I am not an individual among all the students in school. I no it sounds kind of childish and nothing I say will change the rules but it’s not fair to everybody else. We can’t express ourselves when we have to wear tan, navy blue, white and light blue see how boring it sounds. Most people say if we sign petitions the school city will change their laws but it’s like they don’t care either about what we say. This is why I would get rid of school uniforms.

        Id also gets rid of death because last year I lost my brother last year to death, and he was like my best friend we did everything together. That is kind of why it is so hard for me to really have fun. It also makes me cry an I hate to because it makes me feel weak and it makes me seem like I’m a punk. I guess if it’s over someone you care about then it really doesn’t matter. It also makes other people sad and I think that everyone should be happy.

        Last I would get rid of punishment because it ruins every teen’s life. Most of the time when I’m on punishment it’s for some crazy reason. Then I will get off of it after the day that my plans were made. It’s just a waist of time to me it keeps you from doing what you want to do when you want to do it. Then that means you have to look at your house for a bout a month or so and that is just not what’s up. So this is why I would get rid of punishment.