irene lechuga

Irene Lechuga      

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April 25, 2011

Personal Essay

Topic- If I Could Change the World

       If I could the world I’d get rid of the guns, gangbanging and bills. I know thus sounds like a weird list, but I got my reasons.

       First, I’d get rid of guns. The reason I say I would get rid of guns is because people could die or even get hurt. Just the other day a toddler shot his mother. The mother died from the shot wound. Just random innocent people are getting injured. And also there are around kids who shouldn’t even have a gun in their hand.

       Next, I’d get rid of gangbanging- for two reasons. One reason is because there is no point of disliking each other over hand sign and color. Second reason, there is too much violence over it and people are getting hurt or even killed. Even though once in life half of the people that dislike each other now where friends or even grew up together.  

       Finally, I’d get rid of bills for two reasons. One reason is you have to use most of your money to pay those bills. When you could use that money to buy things you need. Second reason is if bills didn’t exist parents wouldn’t stress so much. And also won’t be complaining when we ask for something or some money.
       So that would make my world better, if I’d get rid of guns, gangbanging and bills.