Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Cornell Ferguson

“IF I COULD CHANGE THE
WORLD’’

Cornell Ferguson
English Homework
April 25


Personal Essay
Topic- If I Could Change the world


If I could change the world I would get rid of hunger, violence, and gangs.  I’m going to give you my reasons.
            First, I’d get rid of hunger because shouldn’t anyone be hunger because
Its lots of people throwing away food everyday. I would also get rid of hunger because the food that people throw away they could just give it away to the hungry people that’s what I would do . If I was poor and hungry I would want people to give me food cause wouldn’t know one want to be hungry I know I wouldn’t.
If there wasn’t violence most people would have lived longer than they have. If it wasn’t violence in the world a lot of things would be different than what is now to day. Also if it wasn’t violence lots of people wouldn’t be dead they would have probably would have lived longer. I just wish that violence couldn’t ever exist and probably some of my family members would be alive right now to this day.
I would get rid of gangs because gangs bring violence and violence brings killing people. When you’re in a gang there is no getting out. Also when you’re in a gang you can’t go certain places like if I a person from another gang see you that could probably be the end of your life right there. That’s why is not good to be in a gang because you only could go certain places you cold go. Shouldn’t no one want to be in a gang when you’re in a gang its to places your going to end up and that is dead of in jail.
To make my world better I’d get rid of hunger, violence, and gangs.

1 comment:

  1. i thought your story was very detailed...and i liked the way put heart and thought into it =]

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